Fetch Modus(If they have one):
Hello, I'm new to creating OC's and such and I was wondering whether my first OC was up to standards and was following the systems of HomeStuck and such, thanks so much for letting me use this! I used a few templates and things from online just for guidelines and help.
Name: Eagbet Vadras
Title: Thief of Space
Age: 7.6 Alternian Solar Sweeps
Screen Name: linguisticExplorer
Typing Style: As she is linguistic she will randomly break into another language when typing. (e.g. Hey Gam Gam, お元気ですか?)
Zodiac Sign: The Chinese symbol for twins as she is a linguistic troll her sign is of a different language and she is a Gemini, meaning two
Strife Specibi(Weapon): You wield the wrenchKind specibus and have combined your Monkey Wrench with your Creepy Figurine and Bouncy Ball to create your awesome weapon
Moirail- Falcor Ahvili (Another OC)
Fetch Modus(If they have one): In order to retrieve any item you need to eat the slice of the pie on the pie chart, always steamed and ready to eat. Hopefully you won't go berserk and captchalogue cars constantly in order to eat huge slices of pie
Planet: Land of Age and Frogs
Likes: Languages, adventures, sketching, video games, the indoors, being immature, eating pies, baking pies, looking at pies, sea creatures and scalemates
Hates: The outdoors, sports, people who laugh when they talk, not eating pies, not baking pies, not looking at pies
Bio: Chosen by her Lusus, Nilakanta, as a wriggler, Eagbet grew as a Cerulean blooded troll meaning she is in the high caste of land-dwellers. She later built a hive with her Lusus, and the Imperial Drones, far away from most civilisation and lived in peace. Miss Vadras found her hobbies and quirks over several sweeps of being hatched. Now standing at 6”3 the beautiful young troll living with her strange ways and new companions (Moirail and friends).
Personality: When you meet Eagbet she will seem as a shy and quiet troll, but as you become closer she will be full of beans all the time. She is a hyper and loud troll when she wants to be and will laugh at very immature things. She is immature, linguistic, adventurous, relatively lazy, funny, she thinks she is higher and more important than people she hates and she is quite intelligent. A unknown trait of Eagbet is that she can get a little murderous at times, mostly when she needs to, but she doesn’t murder ALL the time.
Ancestor: The Phonemic
Lusus/Kernelsprite: Eagbet’s Lusus is a murderous, giant flying eel named Nilakanta (NIH-LAH-KAN-TA), meaning “blue-throated”, whom soars through the skies. Nilakanta has four eyes, relating to Eagbet’s ‘double nature’ for she is a Gemini. She refers to her Lusus as ‘Eelmom’. Nilakanta is a ‘sea creature’ as you might call her because of Eagbet’s blood’s closeness to the water-dwellers
Blood Colour: Cerulean, high caste of land-dwellers
Outfit: A black knee-length dress with white collar and her Zodiac sign in the colour of her blood in the middle, light blue socks and cerulean blue running shoes.
Title: Maid of rage
Age: 6 sweeps
Screen Name: Wavingpardox
Typing Style: ~S()~h()w~y()u d()ing~im~d()ing~fine
Zodiac Sign: Twisted flower (something like waves but with a line going threw it)
Strife Specibi(Weapon): Bookkind
Fetch Modus(If they have one): None
Planet: Land of jewls and wood
Hates: Making dolls,walking,smoke,sharpies
Personality: Very Bi-polar,normally just very cocky,rarely grumpy,lazy
Ancestor: The london runner
Blood Color: Bronze
Outfit: Blue jacket,black tank-top,black joggers,3 bracelets
Title: Maid of Blood (get it?)
Age: 7 sweeps
Screen name: realisticBird (I couldn't think of anything else)
Typing style: Ch@ng3s th3 v0w3ls: a=@, e=3, i=!, o=0, u=^
Sign: triangle with a curved line though it
Strife Specibus: Claykind
Relations: Matesprite: Luckey Zolden (fantroll) Morail: Demara (fantroll)
Fetch modus: Tetris Modus (operates by assigning each item you captchalogue in its own tetris block, which you'll place anywhere in the space you have in the modus. The more items you captchalogue, the more space fills up in your tetris-block inventory. Once you fill an entire row of tetris blocks, you can use any item in that row, or uncaptchalogue everything in the row all at once. You can also start over, however that will eject every item you've ever captchalogued. The game will start over automatically if you exceed the inventory limit.)
Planet: Land of Portals and Dreams
Likes: Drawing, sculpting, causing mischief, being around friends, being random, TETRIS
Hates: People hating her, conflict, whining, being under pressure
Bio: Still working on that
Personality: She is very friendly and can usually be found with her Matesprite or Morail or sorting out some sort of conflict. When someone doesn't like her she will do almost anything she can to get them to like her.
Ancestor: The Assassin
Lusus: looks like a tyrannosaurus rex
Blood color: The crapy yellow green in the crayola box
Outfit: blood color shirt with her sign in black and black jean shorts
My Homestuck Troll OC
Name: Luna ((Haha! she's not a troll if she was then she would have a 6X6 name))
Title: Mistress of Water and Sound ((I'm pretty sure it's referring to her god tier title))
Age: 6 sweeps (or 13 in human years)
Screen Name: solarPotato ((does it have anything to do with her symbol?))
Typing Style: words with numbers ( h0w ar3 y0u m8 ) ((it should relate to her symbol))
Zodiac Sign: Neo (a red music sign with water bubbles around it) ((that's not possible it should be her blood color and it should only be one of those two))
Strife Specibi(Weapon): None (can sing a song that can do different things to them) ((no that is bad))
Fetch Modus(If they have one): none yet.
Planet: Earth ((okay two things 1. it's probable related to the game universe and not the outer planets, 2. it wouldn't be Earth seeing as the game destroyed Earth))
Music: All ((no, they can't like all music they have to have a little music, and it's probably related to her theme song))
Likes: Water, Music, Friends, Rain, ((y-your OC is FYAFT levels of bad))
Hates: Being Lonely, Storms, Spiders ((but if she likes rain then she should like storms))
Bio: doesn't remember past but all she remembers is being transported from a land of purple and blue to Earth ((this is so bad))
Personality: Kind, Swimmer, Musician with the violin, Sweet, Loving, Jokester (("swimmer" isn't a personality it's a hobi, loving is the same thing as kind, you put two hobbies in a personality thing))
Ancestor: dosen't know ancestor's name but she has one ((you should still say who her ancestor is))
Luscus/Kernelsprite: her luscus is a swan in human terms ((it should relate to her symbol))
Blood Color: Neon Blue ((that is not a possible blood color, and she would be culled for being a mutant))
Outfit: has a dark gray leather jacket. pink hair dye on the bottom of her hair, always wears headphones around neck, has purple shirt, one blue and one dark purple on one side of her pants ((she CAN'T have hair dye of a higher blood color, she would have a BLACK shirt, she can only ware a higher blood color if she's in a relationship with her))
Title: Thief of Hope
Age: 6 sweeps or 13 in human terms.
Screen Name: paternalNeophyte
Typing Style: ey BaBy! Le7's go swimming!
Zodiac Sign: Bootes, a question mark like sing, but without the dot.
Strife Specibi(Weapon): Axekind
Fetch Modus(If they have one): Pictionary
Planet: Land of Light and Glass
Music: Pop and Dubstep
Likes: Making others happy, Swimming, And the color BLUE!!
Hates: Heights, and quiet places.
Personality: Happy and Excited! Can sometimes be a tad angry, and annoying to her Kismesis, and some certain trolls.
Ancestor: The Resister
Luscus/Kernelsprite: Her lusus is a CatfishMom, which swims with her in the ocean.
Blood Color: Fuschia
Outfit: A black t-shirt with her sign, and she tends to wear a knee-length Fuschia skirt, with her black shoes, her left horn can go straight up, while the other is straight then curves kinda like a ?.
Title: Sylph of Mind
Age: 6 Sweeps
Screen Name: Undecided. Any ideas?
Typing Style: D= D~ I= I-. Same goes with lowercases, proper grammar but bad spelling.
Zodiac Sign: Cygnus, the sawn.
Strife Specibi(Weapon): Undecided.
Fetch Modus(If they have one): Undecided.
Music: Calm music, intrusmentals
Likes: Helping people out, her lusus, animals of any kind,
Hates: Coming off as annoying or stupid, fashion.
Personality: She can come off as annoying and stupid, but people sometimes turn to her for help.
Lusus/Kernelsprite: A double-headed swan with 4 eyes and 4 wings.
Blood Color: Olive.
Outfit:A olive-colored hoodie with a black shirt with her sign underneath, grey pants, short hair thats pointed on the end, her eyes are normal eyes, her lashes are just a bit pointed. She also has a sharp-tooth sticking out of her mouth. Her horns, one is curled and one is pointing this way >
Title: which of space
Screen Name: darkhuntress
Typing Style: l1k3 th1s m4b3
Zodiac Sign: unknown
Strife Specibi(Weapon): claw kind
Fetch Modus(If they have one): file modus
Bio: storm was raised in open forestry area,she made friends with equius and nepeta,a bit shy with the others,but has also taken kindly to Rose and kanaya
Personality: shy with others,may also come off as cold hearted,she is very sweet and lusus like to her trusted friends
Ancestor: dark assassin
Luscus/Kernelsprite: Her Lusus is a big lion in human terms
Blood Color: violet
Outfit: a coal black hoodie,coal black pants,shoes,gloves,and scarf that covers her mouth and nose, her hoodie covers her black hair that is always in a ponytail,her horns look like cat ears,she also has a black tail,her glasses are black rimmed,her eyes also cat like
Name: Miliah Zukahi
Title: Witch of Hope
Age: 6.8 sweeps
Screen Name: CombatPhantom (CP)
Typing Style: Separates letters with arrows ---> all letters are capital except for the last letter (H--->E--->L--->L--->o)
Zodiac Sign: Orion
Strife Specibi(Weapon): Dual wielding swordkind
Relations: Terezi (flushed crush) really the only troll she talks to, mostly she's been interested with her odd flirty behavior and rather enjoys hearing about some of her past 'trials' and just thinks that she is deserving to talk to her, not to mention Terezi doesn't mind her douchy, boisterous attitude. She occasionally talks to Vriska and Gamzee but they are little more than mere acquaintances
Fetch Modus: Slash modus: Has to the slash sylladex with her swords to get an item
Planet: Planet of Metal and Magma (MILOVUS)
Music: Game boss battle soundtracks, war songs, hard rock
Likes: Combat, katanas, being with others, always being on top, being the center of attention, being right, collecting guns, war history
Hates: Cold weather, silence, being alone, being scared, lectures, long waits, monochrome atmospheres, being stuck in one place, small spaces, being corrected, criticism
Bio: She once lived in a post apocalyptic world caused by a kind of nuclear war (not earth), but her lusus soon moved her thinking that that world wasn't safe for her, this is how she became interested in war and combat, she also collected abandoned weapons before she left and now has a huge collection of guns, when she arrived on the metallic planet (it was the closest and seemingly the safest) and she made two swords with scraps of metal mostly because she researched swords seeing that they lasted way longer than guns, as she grew, she became lonely and her lusus never said anything, making him useless to talk to, and never let her travel to other planets which made her become restless, so she tried to connect with someone else and soon began talking with Terezi, and she now stays in her room most of the day chatting with her crush on Pesterlog and when and Terezi isn't available, and Miliah is deathly bored she sometimes chats with Gamzee and Vriska, while wishing her lusus will one day let her be independent and travel to meet those trolls and her crush
Personality: She is very arrogant toward anyone she comes in contact with, acting as if she is some kind of god child and thinks many are beneath her except for a selected few, she always thinks she is right even when she is completely wrong and becomes angry when people try to correct her or say that she isn't better than anyone, she thinks she can beat any kind of monster single handedly but in the end she is a huge scaredy cat and usually retreats from a fight, or begs for mercy if her opponent overpowers her, she is also extremely reckless and jumps in before any thought is considered but thats also because she is extremely impatient, she is also adventurous and outgoing and is always wanting to travel but her lusus never lets her which makes her restless.
Ancestor: The Fallen Warrior
Lusus/Kernelsprite: Medium sized German Shepard looking dog with wings that wears army dog tags
Blood Color: Aquamarine
Outfit: Torn black crop top with camouflage army pants, that her Luscus stole, and brown combat boots
Name: Delta (not his actual, all troll names are six lettered, but he refuses to use his real name or even reveal it to anyone) Matias
Title: the thief of doom
Age: a bit less than 8 sweeps. he seems much older than he is though.
Screen Name: selfdestructiveViking (SV)
Typing Style: separates all the words with dots, ends a sentence with three of these. just.like.this... uses capital letters only when he writes about something/someone he respects. also overuses the word "f*ck". it's fairly easy to understand him
Zodiac Sign: virgo (but the symbol on his shirt is of course the capital delta letter, with two lines next to it)
Strife Specibi(Weapon): axekind
Relations: doesn't want to associate with pretty much anyone (cause he doesn't want to bother them); is moirail with one troll (of course a non canon one)
Fetch Modus(If they have one): array modus that someone left in the human book he found; he found some way to modify it so he can weaponize it
Planet: land of lightning and mist
Music: something like metal; hella aggressive
Likes: not many things. reading one human book about Scandinavian mythology that he found when he was younger, playing games, sometimes drawing; also computers are fascinating to him. there's one thing he absolutely loves... cats!
Hates: himself. he doesn't mind anyone else; it's not like he hates everything in the universe.
Bio: he happens to not remember his past well; but surely it was a little tough, and in result of some things that happened he really dislikes (not hates though) the high blood trolls. he probably experienced something bad from them and that could also cause his low self esteem.
Personality: quiet. when he has to talk, he mainly complains 'bout how bad is it to be him. Or keeps repeating the stories written in his lovely book. seems to be intelligent, but his self-hate hides it really well. his mood swings rapidly and sometimes he fails to control his anger; he always regrets these moments very much and apologizes the "victims". but he keeps forgetting and doing the same things again.
Luscus/Kernelsprite: an eight-legged lynx
Blood Color: something between green and blue (way closer to green). i have no idea how this colour is named
Outfit: simple black t-shirt with his symbol, dark gray "camo" pants and massive black boots
tried to draw him before to clarify his look better... kind of fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/201…
Name: Iliara Zepfos (ILL-e-ARA ZEP-fos)
Title: Thief of Heart
Age: 6 sweeps
Screen Name: fatalStrike (FS)
Typing Style: tyPES haLF tHE woRD iN caPS liKE thIS
Zodiac Sign: Leo
Strife Specibi(Weapon): Pickaxe
Relations: None, she lives far away from the rest of society
Fetch Modus: Presicion Modus. Every time she wants to get an item from her sylladex she has to strike a specific point of the card with her pickaxe.
Planet: Land of Isolation and Tears (LOIAT)
Likes: Gaming, playing with dead birds, leaving people alone (not being a nuisance), practicing with her fetch modus, drawing outlines of dead birds on the ground, swinging her pickaxe at the back of her hive
Hates: Meeting people, her lusus screaming (it knocks her out cold)
Bio: Low self esteem. Wouldn't say she enjoys being alone, just that she prefers not bothering others. She gets the feeling no one likes her because she's "annoying" and "disgusting". She lives in a hive which is basically just a gap in the side of a cliff that her lusus covered up with sticks, rocks and vines stuck together with mud. Spends lots of time in extremely dim light and sets traps on the cliff face to trap unsuspecting birds and insects.
Personality: Again, low self esteem. Doesn't talk to anyone unless she has to and often begins conversations with "i'M soRRY i haVE tO botHER yOU wiTH mY exisTANCE". Kills time by checking her traps, gaming, playing with birds and fucking around with her pickaxe. Also being unconscious. There's a lot of that. Her lusus screams and knocks her out a lot. Constantly tired due to irregular slime baths.
Luscus/Kernelsprite: Birdlike creature that lives in the roof. Accessed by a stairway of sorts, though it's mostly just a stone structure with hand and footholds.
Blood Color: Yellow
Outfit: Basic-looking shirt, pants and shoes.
title: maid of brath
age: 6 sweeps
screen name: lonleyMoon
typing style: h e l l o t h e r e :}
zodiac sign: moon
strife specibi: blue staf
planet: land of night and angles
music: calm and relaxing and piano
likes: gamzee music drawing singing chating with friends
hates: vriska yelling haters being called names annoying trolls vriska vriska and vriska
bio: ( im thinking )
personality: careing nice not really mad sometime social never tells a lie
ancestor: the moon (its her name she is not really the moon...)
luscus: griffon mom
blood color: light blue
outfit: black shirt blue long skirt
-Her name, ALL trolls (All of them) have a six-letter name and last name, and try to make it more exotic, since this they ARE aliens
-"lonleyMoon" that really isn't the most creative and is most likely get hate. Not to mention it isn't spelled correctly (Also, try to edge some points of her away from anything related to the "Moon", again not being the most creative)
-Her Sign is a Moon, please change that because that's the sign of either a Derse or Prospit dreamer
-Her ancesestor, Ancestor names usually range around 8 letters to 10 letters I believe, be a little more creative! An example would be Fantroll's ancestor, "The Puppeteir"
-If her blood color is "Light blue" she is most likely a mutant, so add some background to her like: "How did she survive the breeding caves", "What does she do so she doesn't get culled" stuff like that
-If she IS a mutant, she wouldn't want to show off her blood color....because then she would be found and culled (killed)
-Why does she hate Vriska so much?
-Why is she attracted to Gamzee?
-Fetch Modus means what Fetch Modus does she use and what is it.
-Relations mean like "Matesprit, Moirail, Auspitice, Kismesis" things like that
-Does she have any quadrants filled? I have a fantroll that needs some filled if you want.
Title: Heir of Life
Age: 6 sweeps
Screen name: wintersChild
Typing style: Types....like....this....
Strife Specibi: Fightingfankinds (two fighting fans)
Relations: friends with non-Canon trolls.
Fetch modus: journal modus
(Their are 16 cards, when collected the item turns into writing. If theirs too much, a random item's word is 'erased' and the item is discarded, the only way to access it is to open the page with a code)
Planet: Alternia/Prospit/Land of Flowers, and Night.
Music: Christmas Carols, and Pop.
Likes: Playing in the snow, cooking/baking, sewing/knitting, and drawing.
Hates: too much heat.
Bio: lived in the snowy mountains with her Polarbearmom, and her Lusus' tribe, she usually gathered someone berries, hunted rabbits, and fished in the ice rivers. Her Lusus and tribe died in an avalanche, she escaped after her lusus scarificed itself to save her, she was upset but she moved on after meeting her friends, they started playing SGRUB, and ended up living on one planet together to hide from the destruction.
Personality: Very calm person, she is mysterious and cold to those who aren't her friends, she is tough and a very good fighter, she is quiet and stubborn and a hard worker. She is also very stealthy, so it helps when she wants to do a sneak-attack against imps or something.
Ancestor: the Snow Mage
Blood color: Light blue (an in-between between Blue and Teal)
Outfit: black turtle-neck with sign that has sleeves that go past her fingers, the sweater goes to the top of her thighs, she then wears black pants, black boots, and she wears black oval glasses.
It should be replaced with just, Sign:
Other then that, very good OC sheet.
Screen Name: musicalMystery
Age: 17 Earth years/Approx. 7.8 sweeps
Title: Knight of Heart
Typing Quirks: H is )(, o is (), e is 3, s is z, a is /-\.
Zodiac Sign: Tiger (Chinese Zodiac)
Strife Specibus: A spear.
Relations: None at the moment.
Fetch Modus: Map of imagination (One can teleport anywhere. Time limit is 30 minutes.)
Planet: Land of Love and Calmness
Music: Classical Music, Pop.
Likes: Listening to music, finding new things, keeping cats at home, seeing love.
Hates: Boring games
Bio: (Haven't thought of it)
Personality: Caring, sensitive, rarely cusses.
Ancestor: Agapi Mousiki
Lusus: A big leopard
Blood Color: Teal
Outfit: Wears a red, loose shirt with a quarter note symbol on her chest, paired with blue short and black boots.