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OC Revamp XD

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This is for :iconcoringospoonshade:

She asked me to help revamp her OC so here we are XD

I gave her just some light purple streaks in her hair, and a ponytail so that her hair is never in the way.
She wears her headband like a cap to protect her head from the sun.The jacket is made out of lightweight material that keeps her warm in cool weather and cool in warm weather. The Uchiha symbol represents her ties to Sasuke lol. She has light purple shirt(i feel that it would blend in easier and that Sasuke is partial to the color). Her Shinobi sandals have heels(to deal better damage to her enemy) and their are dark purple(because who says they cant be?)

I do hope you like this hunny, I tried to keep your OC similar to what she used to be but without any Mary-Sue traits others may have thought she had...........

OC(C)~CoringoSpoonShade
Base(C)~Ronoke
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:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I am not going to sugar coat it because then it wouldn't be constructive criticism .

While the hair and over all outfit look better than how she dressed before , the overall outfit looks too modern to be something found in Naruto.

It just looks like you slapped on an outfit and added the pouch hostler <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="^^;" title="Sweating a little..."/>
Try doing a little more research on ninja attire as well as her abilities . At times clothing designs give one insight on their abilities, like how various sound ninja wear bells for their attacks.

Just a thought , but over all the concept is better than her original outfit.